Awake by Sleep, Life by Death.

[Bale]

Ok so this story is what i decided to make, its based off a dream i had but i morphed it into a story. Please dint tell me how bad it is but if you would like to point out any errors please do so.

awake-life.blogspot.com/2010/07/ch1.html

I own the story but would like to thank Tigrr for the name of the main character.

[TigRRess]

Okay, Spelling errors from the beginning.
Women is supposed to be woman
In the dream you said angel. It's supposed to be angle
At the part, 'You must be hungary' it's supposed to be hungry.
'Your not part of this tribe' It's supposed to be you're
And lastly, you said shouter when it was supposed to be shouted.
There were some I didn't feel like saying cause they didn't bother me as much.