|
Post by Kale Ikataru on Jun 5, 2010 19:25:00 GMT -5
According to me, this is better than my other story. Anyway, here it is. Black-Mist Academy: Prologue
Nobody could believe how much blood was spilled that day. Nobody knew who did it. Many were devastated. Especially a boy named Axel Soranovsky. Presently¡K ¡§I can¡¦t believe they did that. My parents didn¡¦t do anything wrong. Nothing!¡¨ Axel was in a moment of pure grief. Not exactly what you would call numb with grief, but more depressed and spiteful. Axel was in the hospital, as he just got out of the shop his parents owned when the bomb that killed his parents was activated. It seemed rather oddly convenient that he was out of the shop just in time. The doctor said he was lucky. If he had been one step behind, he could have died. "Don¡¦t worry. At least you were lucky.¡¨ The nurse was trying to comfort him, fruitlessly. What the nurse said was true, however, not only his parents died that day. In 6 other parts of the world, 7 more parents were killed, and their kids had just stepped out in time to avoid being killed. Nobody knew why. On the same exact day, in the same exact hour, that was what had happened. It was truly amazing. And yet, also saddening. "Who cares about being lucky? I would rather die." He arrogantly said. Meanwhile, Axel was thinking in his head, he would find the murderers. And kill them! Then, the nurse left.
¡§Has it been done? Have the families been killed?¡¨ A man in the shadows asked, maliciously. ¡§My lord¡K All the parents were killed. Some of the children have been killed. But 7 children remain standing." Another man replied. ¡§Hm. I'm content enough with you're job. Children are easy to dispose of.¡¨ Again, malicious evil was in those words as the first man spoke. He continued, ¡§Wait. Interesting¡K My other spies report that A7 had something to do with this. Idiot. Send in ¡¥K¡¦.¡¨ ¡§But¡K ¡¥K¡¦ is your top assassin. It would be a waste to have him eliminate the children so easily.¡¨ The second man replied. ¡§Are you questioning me?¡¨ The first man boomed. The second man quickly replied again, ¡§No my lord. ¡¥K¡¦ would make a quick job of it.¡¨ ¡§How true that is, how true that is¡K¡¨ The first man laughed.
|
|
|
Post by Kale Ikataru on Jun 6, 2010 11:31:33 GMT -5
Thanks. ^^ I'm hoping my other chapters will be longer...
|
|
|
Post by Kale Ikataru on Jun 6, 2010 12:24:27 GMT -5
Before I start Chapter 1, I must tell people stuff. Ok. This book takes place in 2051, on Jan. 1st. Done. --------------------------- Chapter 1: Hospitalized Murder wasn¡¦t a hard thing to do for Ethan Kalibur. In fact, that was what he had did. He was the one who had bombed the several places around the world. He couldn¡¦t believe he missed those seven kids. Kids! (Technically, kids are baby goats. But in this case, he meant children.) Oh well. He wanted to finish the job. He entered room 107. He would have his vengeance.
Meanwhile, in room 107, Axel Soranovsky was bored. Nothing exciting happened after the nurse left. He was bored for exactly 3 hours and one minute. Axel counted. And suddenly, just while Axel was going to say ¡¥three hours, 1 minute, 1 second,¡¦ the door slowly creaked open. To reveal Ethan Kalibur. ¡§Hello. Are you Axel Soranovsky?¡¨ ¡§Yes¡K Why?¡¨ Axel hesitantly asked. The man responded, ¡§No reason. No reason. I just heard your mom died. It¡¦s all over the news. So¡K I¡¦m sorry. It must be hard to lose your parents at such a young age.¡¨ He walked closer to Axel¡¦s bed. Surprisingly, Axel suddenly replied kindly, ¡§No, it¡¦s fine.¡¨ Axel smiled and said ¡§I¡¦m sorry.¡¨ ¡§For what?¡¨ Ethan was suddenly alarmed. This kid suddenly seemed dangerous. ¡§For this!¡¨ Axel was hovering over the emergency button. And he pushed. Many heard it. All the doctors and nurses came rushing over. One specific doctor, the doctor who treated him, got there first. His name was Miles Sygan. ¡§¡¦K¡¦!¡¨ Miles shouted, while he glared fiercely. Ethan suddenly got out a gun. ¡§Good to see you again, Miles. Too bad it¡¦s going to be the last time you ever see me!¡¨ Ethan loaded his gun and¡K. Axel tackled him? ¡§Good job boy. Just like your father!¡¨ Miles lifted Axel up and put him on the bed. Suddenly, Miles jumped onto the bed as well! ¡§We¡¦ll meet again Kalibur! So for now, sayonara!¡¨ The floor under the bed suddenly flipped over, and flipped again to reveal an empty bed. ¡§Dangit!¡¨ Suddenly, everyone else was arriving. Ethan pocketed his gun, and jumped out the window, and onto the window-washer platform. He then disappeared.
Meanwhile, under the floor of the bed, in a small enclosed space, was Axel and Miles. ¡§Where are we?¡¨ Axel wondered, almost to himself. ¡§We are in the chamber of evil. Just kidding, we¡¦re in an elevator. I know, you have a lot of questions, so you may begin.¡¨ Miles responded. ¡§Okay¡K Who are you? I mean, what¡¦s your real job?¡¨ ¡§Can¡¦t tell you that yet.¡¨ ¡§Fine. Where are we going?¡¨ ¡§Can¡¦t tell you that either.¡¨ Axel was starting to get annoyed. ¡§What do you know about my father?¡¨ ¡§That, I can answer. Your father was a brave, great man, with far too many secrets. Although your mom knows them too. And me. So it¡¦s not much a secret. Axel, your father was murdered by that man up there. The man¡¦s name was Ethan Kalibur. Or otherwise known as ¡¥K¡¦. The most ruthless murderer in the American underworld.¡¨
|
|
|
Post by Admin on Jun 7, 2010 19:10:39 GMT -5
I love it more!
|
|
|
Post by TigRRess on Jun 7, 2010 19:53:52 GMT -5
I like it. (my word was stolen, hence I had to change my word.) Though now my compliment seems less enthusiastic but nonetheless, it's awesome. Symbols n all. XP
|
|
|
Post by Kale Ikataru on Jun 7, 2010 20:18:49 GMT -5
Thanks, both of you. =) One thing. The symbols weren't supposed to be in there. They randomly appeared. XD
|
|
|
Post by Kale Ikataru on Jun 11, 2010 21:00:34 GMT -5
Chapter 2: Axel and Tomas The rest of the trip down was silent. A minute later, they got out, and a fairly tall Englishman was standing there, his expression unreadable. Seven more kids were here. ¡§Found the last one boss.¡¨ Miles said. ¡§Good, Miles. You may leave.¡¨ Miles knew that wasn¡¦t a request but an order. He left. The ¡¥boss¡¦ then said ¡§Hello. I¡¦m Gailen Bienask. I have authority from governments around the world to help with crime. I have put engineers around the world to help make more machinery to stop wars. I enlisted agents to the secret services in every country. My job is to prevent crime, to stop evil overall. Now, I have gathered dozens of kids either targeted or have interesting abilities. By targeted I mean their parents shot down, or their friends or relatives dead from murder. It is the dawn of various new teams. Now, each of you, starting from you Axel, introduce yourselves.¡¨
"I¡¦m Axel Soranovsky.¡¨ Axel began. ¡§I¡¦m pretty ordinary, and my life has been too, all up ¡¥till now. I lived on the canadian countryside, around Edmonton, Alberta. I had quite a few friends, and I was content. I was a bit odd, as I had a few girls as friends while no other boy did. But I didn¡¦t care. I wish nothing would change. But they do. They have a way of changing. Then, my parents died. Died from a bomb hidden in the book shop. I was bitter. Then, even if I didn¡¦t need any treatment, and I felt fine, they brought me to a hospital. Now I think I know why. Because of everyone here. Miles, that guy that just left, brought me down here. He was nice to me, and answered me a certain question. Ethan Kalibur was who killed my parents. Now, I¡¦m here.¡¨ Axel finished. He sat down.
Another boy got up. ¡§My name is Tomas Hettwin. Unlike Axel there, I wasn¡¦t that ordinary. I was born grew up in England, as a very rich boy. In fact, I was a son of a English baroness and rich American man. Without my parents knowing, I was taught ways of subterfuge, and stealing. I was suddenly kidnapped one day, by a man named Gregory Vaynson. He proved to be one of the guys here. He brought me here, and a hour later, my parents were killed. I knew the guys here could have saved them too, but I don¡¦t know why. I¡¦m done.¡¨ Tomas said with a fairly british accent. Then, the boy named Tomas sat down. It was silent. Both stories seemed tragic. Would the others be too?
|
|
|
Post by TigRRess on Jun 11, 2010 22:06:00 GMT -5
Still Awesome!
|
|
|
Post by confused on Jun 11, 2010 22:07:47 GMT -5
WHY IS EVERYONE MAKING BOOKS AND STORIES ALL OF A SUDDEN!?!?
|
|
|
Post by Kale Ikataru on Jun 12, 2010 14:16:19 GMT -5
No clue.
|
|
|
Post by Kale Ikataru on Jul 2, 2010 19:42:39 GMT -5
Chapter 3: Siege? The rest of the stories were pretty much the same. There was a girl named Raegan Evancea, and she lived in the city of Paris. Her family was fairly normal. One day, a woman knocked her out. Then, she was here. Another girl who had a pink streak in her brown hair named Natalie Shiu was born in Beijing, China. Her family was just like Raegan¡¦s. Normal. A random bunch knocked her out. She was here. Pretty much the same story for the four people left. Xyn Gregorvich, who was born in Russia. Tyra and Kria Ashanti were twins born in Africa. Finally, there was Devin Nyhara, who was born in Argentina. All of there stories were pretty much the same. They had a normal family. The rest of their family died. They were the survivors. The sole survivors. Suddenly, as Devin finished his story, an explosion could be heard outside. Galien, the so called boss got up. His face was completely nonchalant. He picked up a phone and dialled a quick number. Galien muttered a few words, then faced the children again. ¡§We are under siege apparently. This is very dangerous. Everyone, go inside that locker. It will lead you to another man. He will then help you escape. I will stay and try to hold them off.¡¨ Galien smiled. This would probably be an uneven match. All the more fun for him... Axel, Tomas, Raegan, Natalie, Xyn, Tyria, Kria, and Devin all rushed into the locker. Suddenly, the locker¡¦s floor gave way! When they landed, they were in an enclosed room that was made completely out of metal. Or at least the walls were. The floors had thick black carpeting, and a giant computer was right in the middle of the room. Many people in lab-coats were working around the edge, in their own cubicles. In the center, a rather old looking man looked very pleased to see them, as if they were old friends, and this happened every day. ¡§So you must be the new agents. Welcome!¡¨ The man¡¦s laugh erupted from his through. ¡§My name is Dr. Hamish White. You guys can call me white, or Hamish. I hate the nickname doctor. It sound too... boring. Anyhow, I supply gadgets, weapons, and... pretty much everything else. You guys can¡¦t have weapons. At least not right now. That¡¦s what the boss said. Oh how I would love to give you a small exploding spear. But I shall not. Instead, I¡¦m here to supply you with rather interesting gadgets. Hm.¡¨ He pointed at Devin. ¡§You seem the most interested. Come up here Devin.¡¨ Devin rushed up, his face a gigantic smile. Suddenly, the whole ground shook again. A familiar figure appeared through a doorway. Two mountain sized muscular men beside the figure had gotten Galien. ¡§If you want your boss back, you have to give us the children.¡¨ Both men said, at the same time.
|
|
|
Post by TigRRess on Jul 3, 2010 12:41:05 GMT -5
Hey, I didn't see symbols this time. Still awesome and the unnecessarily large chapter title is awesome too.
|
|
|
Post by Kale Ikataru on Jul 3, 2010 14:16:36 GMT -5
Hm. Well I didn't add the symbols in the first place. Anyway, thanks.
|
|